The Bad

The things that haven’t gone well are:

Selling Line

I think that the selling line hadn’t really turned out as well I first thought of it, to start with the thing that I had in mind were it going right across from left to right underneath the title. But in the end it ended up in the left hand side due to the image laid out in the centre of the page. Something else is that I would have wanted its background to be of some sort of colour which will help in bringing out the writing just like the cover line at the centre “The new chick on the block”.

Date Line

This also applies to the dateline because I would have wanted the selling line and date line to be directly below each other in front of the magazine but as mentioned above due to the change of layout with the image at the centre it meant that I had to split them both up, resulting in the dateline being relocated towards the left hand side.